The Dreaded Pink Lines (read and tell me what you think Plz)

Stephene - posted on 02/22/2010 ( 92 moms have responded )

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As I look down at the white plastic test strip in my hands tears fall from my red swollen eyes. The two pink lines staring up at me, it’s like they were laughing and saying “I told you so, I told you so!” The only thing I could think of is that my life is over, what am I going to do with a baby. I’m an only child ,no cousins or neighbors to baby sit , I’ve never taken care of a baby so how am I going to raise one??? I get up from the toilet where I was sitting and throw the test in garbage by the sink and pull my pants back up. It is now 7:30 and I am late for school. I run down the stairs past my mom who in her mind thought her world was still perfect. I grimace as she yells “Goodbye sweetheart!” I run down the sidewalk new tears starting to well up in my eyes. I only live two blocks from school so I always walk. It gives me time to think and enjoy the fresh air. Good thing today I was late and did not have time to think. Thinking brought up problems and boy did I have a major problem, and serious problems brought tears. I can’t go into school crying that would just look silly. Then there was the fact that I still had to tell my boyfriend, which we had only been dating three months. We never used protection I guess we didn’t think it would happen to us. Being stupid! His name is Jason and he’s 22 and I’m only 16 so that starts a whole other problem that I just don’t have time for.







*That is just a little story that I'm doing for fun, so let me know what you think.

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Angela - posted on 03/30/2010

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I work at a continuation school where we have young expecting girls on a regular basis. I have read many stories by a woman named Marilyn Renalds your writing is very similar. I would love to share this story with my young mom's if that is alright with you. I was 18 when I had my little girl and I know how your character feels. You should publish your story it could help girls who are living this story for real! I find that the hardest part for my girls is that they feel so alone and like nobody understands. Having stories like this to read help them to feel more "normal". Thank you for letting us read this wonderful piece of literature. I am looking foward to coming back and finding out what happens...

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Miranda - posted on 03/28/2010

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I can definitely relate to this story alot!! I was 15 when I found out I was pregnant and my boyfriend (now husband) was 26. I'm now 17, our daughter is 6 months and we're doing great!! I definitely want to hear more of this story!!

Chelsea - posted on 03/28/2010

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it was awesome i could really relate to you i wasent at school when i fell pregnant but was just 18 and her dad was 26 so when i fell pregnant not everyone was happy about it not even me.

Nicola - posted on 03/27/2010

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What happens next! I'm almost in tears when I read that last bit, I need to know!

Jade - posted on 03/27/2010

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thats sounds amost like my life except i was not at school when this happened and i was 15 and he was 20 now im 17 and he is 22 with a 20 month old beautiful baby boy and we are still madly in love

Ashley - posted on 03/09/2010

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Aimee I am so sorry for your loss I couldn't even imagine your pain. But I feel I need to ask, you do know this story is fiction right? She stated pretty early on that this wasn't her personal story but a writing of hers.... (one I wait with baited breath to finish reading!!!)

Aimee - posted on 03/08/2010

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Stephene My name is Aimee And god I wish I were you see I have no Uterus and my daughter died at 2 days old so If you can't keep your baby please think of me and E-mail me At lilacgirl332010@aol.com thank you Hugs and Kisses Aimee N Evelio

Stephene - posted on 03/03/2010

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Part 10



I call Jason before I lay down to go to bed that night. He answers and I can tell he had told his mom. I tensed up just a second not really knowing what to expect. After about five minutes of saying hey and talking, he finally told me that she was ok with it and that she wanted me to move in as well. I don’t think I could more excited!! If I get to actually live with him it will be completely awesome. Waking up with him by my side every single day is like my dream. Any way after I stop gushing over the phone making a fool of myself we say our “I love you’s” and “Goodbye’s”. I put on my night clothes and crawl in bed with my computer and get ready for bed. I check my facebook and play my games for a minute then I turn the computer off and go to sleep. I wake up the morning and run to the toilet immediately and throw up. Good thing it is Monday and my mother always goes into work early. I am going to have to tell her because she is going to catch me doing this one of these days and this is not how I want her to find out. She deserves better than that. So anyway I wash out my mouth and get ready for school. Another long boring day in school with a bunch of little kid drama talk going on. I don’t know how much longer I can act like I care. Good thing school is almost out next week we do our final exams then the week after that we our out. I’m in ninth grade now, what am I going to do after the baby is born? I haven’t even thought about school yet. I don’t know if I want to finish or stay at home with my baby. Very soon I’m going to have to sit down and really think about it. There is so much I haven’t thought about I really need my mom more then anything right now. I know she will help me through these hard decisions no matter how mad she is at me.

The final bell rings and I gather my things and head home. Everyday is looking more and more like the same. It’s so boring through out the week when I don’t have Jason. To find things to do until bedtime is so hard. I mean you can only stay on the computer so long before there is nothing else to do. Jason is at work so I can’t talk to him yet. There is never anything on TV to watch and we get like nine hundred channels. After homework I guess I’ll help mom with dinner then take a bath to save time in the morning and then call Jason to tall him good night then go to sleep. Sounds so very exciting don’t it. At least a baby will spice things up around here. I followed my plan all the way until bed time. Having a schedule did not help time pass by any faster, but everything on my mind did make it go faster. All this stress is going to kill me one. I was laying there thinking about school, baby, and all the things that I will have to give up to soon. As I lay there thinking my eyes closed slowly and before I knew it I was fast asleep.

A searing pain through my stomach jerked me out of bed at like three in morning. I jumped out of bed and doubled over as another tearing pain ripped its way through my stomach. As I was bent over I seen red pouring out over my legs. There was blood running down my legs like someone a just turned on a faucet. I fell to my knees on the floor as tears rolled down my face and I called out for my mom. I screamed her name with such fierceness that she jumped out her bed from her deep sleep and ran full speed down the hall to my open door way. She looked at me with so much shock and hurt it frightened even me. I looked at her sobbing, doubled over, and blood pouring out me and said “What’s happening to me?”

Stephene - posted on 03/03/2010

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Part 9



We stayed all lovey dubey all weekend. When Sunday came fast as usual we didn’t want to part. I told him after I tell my mom maybe she will let me move in with you with out fighting over it. I mean once I’m pregnant I’m legally an adult and can do what I want. The only thing is, is that your over eighteen so she can say something about that. I don’t want you getting in trouble over me. He wouldn’t really say anything to me he just kissed me on the forehead and said things will work out. What the hell is that supposed to mean? When you’re with someone you love and time doesn’t seem to exist things seem to be exactly like there supposed to but when all that is over things just fall apart again. That is the way he makes me feel and I know I can’t live with out him. When you have someone that means so much to you and loves you to you’d be a damn fool to let them go, wouldn’t you?

He dropped me off at the end of the road as usual. Although this time it was harder for me to get out of the car and harder for him to pull off. Why does being pregnant change so many things? At least now they are changed for the better. Now I have to go inside to my mom and act like everything is completely normal. Sooner or later I’m going to have to tell her. I just don’t want to hurt her. I mean when is the right time to break your mother’s heart. There isn’t one, but I’m going to have to because it’s not like I hide this forever. I mean I’m going to get all fat and my skin going to start like ripping apart or something leaving big old purple scar things. I’m going to be popping out a kid so I think she will notice something’s up. Jason said he was going to tell his mother tonight. Of course he is older and it’s so much easier for him. At least I think it would be. Well all would be good except for the fact he is going to have to finally tell her how old I am really am. I know her and she is so going to flip when she finds that out. She has been thinking I’m eighteen and legal for her son and in reality I’m only fifteen. She is probably going to be worried about him gong to jail. As cool as he acted about all this underneath I think he is scared too. Maybe that is why he was so quiet after I told him. I mean it’s like an eight year difference. Gosh, it sounds so weird when I actually say it out loud. Some people would think that is weird but I do act a lot older than what I am and when you like or love someone the way I love him you don’t even really notice age. But if my mom doesn’t like this then he can get in a lot of trouble. I don’t know what all could happen but I know it’s illegal for us to be together like we are. I don’t want to raise his baby by myself while he’s in jail. If I though my life was over now then that would be like taking me and putting me in a paper shredder. If that happens you might as well because life would be nothing without him anyway

Stephene - posted on 03/03/2010

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LOL soooo sorry I'm just kind of at a stand still in the story I will try my hardest to post some tonight ok. Thanks for reading.

Ashley - posted on 03/02/2010

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lol I have been checking every day too lol!! I just didnt want to push you lol!

Amber - posted on 03/02/2010

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Ok i have been checking this thread everyday since you posted the last part and so far nothing. I would like to finish reading it cuz i'm very curious to what happens next!!

Stephene - posted on 03/02/2010

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lol sorry i was wondering how many ppl would actually miss the story i guess ur the only one. Plus i have a little writers block but i will write very soon. promise!

Stephene - posted on 02/26/2010

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Lol ok i post atleast once a day so make sure you come check it out. Thank you!

Kym - posted on 02/26/2010

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I think i like this one better than the edited version.... so keep em coming please... Im keen to know what happens next! I love it

Stephene - posted on 02/25/2010

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Her is the url to the edited version that u must read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's longer and better so please read. I had someone say they couldn't fing it so here is the url http://apps.facebook.com/circleofmoms/te... just copy and then paste it into your broowser! Enjoy aand thanks for reading!

Kirsty - posted on 02/25/2010

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more more more... this is amazing.. its nearly exazctly like my actual story.. please give me more..

Stephene - posted on 02/25/2010

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Part 8



It wasn’t until after I said it that I realized what I said. I could reach up and slap myself for saying it like that. I was thinking in my head funnier ways or lighter ways I could tell him I didn’t actually mean to say it out loud though. I looked at him to see what his face looked like to believe it or not he didn’t look that mad at all. He looked down as if trying to find something to say. He looked up and held his hand out to me “Come here”. I walked over to the bed and sat down beside him.

“You know I love you right?” He said quietly looking down at his fumbling fingers.

“Yes I know and I love you too.”

“Are you really pregnant, like are you sure?”

“Yes I’m positive I took a test two days ago.”

“Ok then I want to ask you something serious then.”

“Um ok go ahead.”

“I love you very much and I want to come live here with me and marry me” he said. I know my mouth hit the floor. I can’t believe he actually just said that. It wasn’t what I expected from him at all. He was starting to look at me all weird because I’m just sitting here and not saying anything. I love him and maybe it would be best to come stay here and I would have Jason all the time. So I take a breath and say “Yes I would love to!”

He jumped up kissed me softly and whispered “I love you”.

Aubrey - posted on 02/25/2010

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ok good! =] are you writing this as your experience or just making it up? It's really good!

Aubrey - posted on 02/25/2010

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wheres the rest? i cant find the edited version but i'm waiting for part 8 =] plzzzz dnt say u've quit writing this story

Stephene - posted on 02/25/2010

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Thank ya'll for reading I'm glad ya'll like it! Please don't forget the better edited version go and read it if you enjoy this one you will like it even better. It's under The Dreaded Pink Lines (Edited Version)

Requelle - posted on 02/25/2010

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this story is so good most of us have a similar story to tell when i fell pregnant the first time my partner and i had only been together 4 months i was stressing out for two days about how to tell him i thought he would be really angry so i tried not to believe i was i freaked out at the doctor and the receptionist then freaked at my sister and her friend and then stomped home in the hot sun took me half an hour to stomp home but it gave me time to calm down my sister was really supportive about it all until my partner came home he was very supportive and my sister was so upset that i would ignore her and care about her any more and my mum was so angry two days of stressing out caused me to miscarry and that was the hardest thing to go through all that emotion all that hurt 9 months later we were pregnant again this time we were happy now we have a beautiful baby girl she is 4 months old and i couldnt have asked for a more beautiful baby thats my messy story please write more i wanna hear how he takes the news and please add me to your circle xoxoxox

Ashley - posted on 02/24/2010

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Wow way to leave us hanggin!! I cant wait to hear what happens next and how he takes the news! I am way into your story!

Stephene - posted on 02/24/2010

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Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EVERYONE MAKE SURE YOU CHECK OUT THE EDITED VERSION IT'S ALOT BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE CHECK IT OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Stephene - posted on 02/24/2010

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Part 7



Sure enough there he was in all his sexy manliness waiting on me. I ran over and get into the car and kiss him long and hard on the lips. I missed him so much. We talk and talked the whole hour and half to his house or his mother’s house. By the time we got there and got it on for like ever (ha ha) and fallen asleep I had forgotten all about telling him I was pregnant. In the morning I guess will be a good time. It will have to be anyway. So we slept on and off all night keeping each other up with touches and whispers. I want everything to stay like this just for time to stop and stay in this moment. I hope when I tell him it doesn’t ruin this because I don’t know if I can be with out him. Ii really do love him with all my heart I really do he is my light in the darkness. I know it sounds corny but that’s the way I really feel. Tomorrow everything will be different I know it. Maybe he want mind as much, maybe he will, and on and on I went through out the night until I finally fell asleep.

I was awakened with sweet kisses up my arms. I smiled and looked down at him and moved up and kissed me on the lips and said “I love you no matter what” I looked at him and thought we’ll see in a minute. “I love you too”. There is nothing like getting some for breakfast (ha ha) Sorry I need to tone down on the sex talk huh? I can get a little out of line even for my own mind to handle. You know what they say a lady on the street a freak in the bed. This doesn’t actually go with me because I’m not a lady yet but oh well its good enough. I got up and went to the bathroom I told him to stay in bed because I had something to tell him. As I walked out I blew him a kiss and hurried to the bathroom. I stood there looking in the mirror trying to calm myself so I could go back in there and change this mans life. I took a few deep breaths ran my fingers through my hair then went back into the bedroom. I walked in and he was laid out on the bed, he looked up at me as I walked in the door and I blurted out “I’m pregnant, you’re going to be my baby daddy!”

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